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EXTERIOR: OUTSIDE, IN FRONT OF A
RESTAURANT
The camera moves from the top of the
building and pans down until it centers on the name of the restaurant.
It is a beautiful restaurant where all the couples go to. The outside
of the restaurant has a bunch of windows and through them we can see
several tables with people sitting at them. The camera pans through all
of the people that are sitting at the tables. Cut to inside
INTERIOR: RESTURANT, NIGHT
It seems that many of the patrons of
left for the night as it is not that busy. The camera pans around the
Hostess area and then into the main dining room. In the middle of the
room there is a beautiful young woman in a red dress. The camera comes
in on her from the left side as it turns and goes right in front of
her. She has a quiet look of patience on her face as she sits by
herself at the table. Just then a look of relief comes across her face
as she looks up. Camera turns to her side and we see a sharp dressed
man entering the dining room with a dozen roses in his hands. He comes
over to the table, bends down, and the two exchange kisses for a couple
of seconds.
JOHN
(HE HANDS HER THE ROSES) Happy
anniversary baby. (He turns and takes his seat.
Kristin
Thanks. How was your day?
John
It was hell (A sigh of relief as he
talks) Old man Winters had us go back and double check all of the
records for the past year.
Kristin
He is a real pain in the ass
John
I would not be where I am at now if
it wasn’t for him.
Kristin
I know, you’re a great trial lawyer
John
Sorry I’m late
Kristin
Forget about it, you will make up for
it later
The waiter comes over to the table
Waiter
Can I take your order?
The scene dissolves and the scene
goes dark.
EXTERIOR: HOUSE, NIGHT
Their car pulls up to a nice sized
house, a house that is bigger and nicer than most houses that young
couples live in. John gets out of the car and walks over to the
passenger side to help out Kristin. She gets out and John picks her up
and carries her into the house.
INTERIOR: HOUSE, NIGHT
John comes walking into the bedroom
and sits down on the bed and then proceeds to lay back. A noise of a
door opening is heard coming from the right and the camera pans over in
that direction. John looks up and sees Kristin come out in a beautiful
nightgown. She has a very happy look on her face. She comes over to
the bed and stands in front of John. She bends down and puts her hands
around his shoulders and picks him up.
Kristin
I love you
John
I love you too
Kristin proceeds to kiss John on his
lips and then his forward. She pulls back for a second.
Kristin
I made a wise choice in marrying you
John
I made one too by asking
They bother hug and then John picks
her up and lays her behind him. He then lies down on top of her and
starts to kiss her. He gets up and takes his shirt off, and then lays
back down kissing her. The scene fades out
INTERIOR: KITCHEN, MORNING
The camera opens in the kitchen where
John is standing on the side of the counter reading the paper. He has a
cup of coffee in his other hand and he takes frequent sips. He makes
little comments to himself after reading some of the paper. As he
continues about his morning routing, we see two hands slowly come around
his stomach. He drops the paper and slowly looks over his shoulder.
Kristin has rested the side of her face on the middle of his back. He
puts down his coffee and caresses her hands.
John
Good morning
Kristin
(She is very well rested, but showing
signs of tiredness) Morning, last night was amazing
John
Yea I slept well, how bout you?
Kristin
(She hits him lightly, but it was
sincere)
You will always be a funny guy
John
What can I say? (He looks down at his
watch) Oh, I have to go. (He kisses her on the lips.) I will see you
later
Kristin
You bet your ass you will
John walks away but then Kristin
pulls him back for one last kiss
John
See-ya
He walks over to the door and before
he leaves, he turns back and says
I love you
Kristin
I know
He walks out the door and the camera
comes back to Kristin who pours a glass of orange juice and gazes out
through the front window as John drives off. The scene ends.
INTERIOR: SUPERMARKET, DAY
The camera comes to a close up of a
pregnancy test. From there it slowly pans towards her where it stops as
she is looking at. She grabs it, reads the back of it, and then puts in
her bag. She displays a smile on her face as she places it into the
bag. The camera stays still but turns as she continues to walk down the
aisle. Cut to checkout line.
Kristin comes to the line with her
groceries and places them on the belt. The lady that is working the
checkout line notices the pregnancy kit and asks her a question.
Cashier
Oh, well good luck to you.
Kristin
Thanks. I have my fingers crossed.
Cashier
I remember the first my husband and I
had a kid. (She stops to think) Oh to be young again
Kristin
Yes maam.
Cut to outside of the supermarket
EXTERIOR: SUPERMARKET, DAY
Kristin walks out of the door with
her arms full of groceries. She has one bag in each hand. As she walks
across the side walk, a young kid is seen coming down the sidewalk on a
BMX bike. He is going pretty fast as he comes closer to her. He goes
onto the road and then jumps back on the sidewalk. This causes Kristin
to look to her left. But it is too late. The biker nearly collides
right into Kristin but instead he only hits the groceries she was
carrying with his shoulder. The hit was strong enough to cause her to
drop the bags. As she looks up she sees the biker ride off down the
sidewalk. He is laughing.
Kristin
Asshole
She bends down and picks up her
groceries. All of the commotion has her all worked up. She has
forgotten about the road in front of her. She is still shaken up but
she turns and takes one step onto the road. A huge noise comes from her
left. It is a truck barreling down the road. She turns to her left but
there is nothing she can do. She thinks that she is a goner but out of
nowhere, a man comes running in. He lunges for her and throws her back
onto the sidewalk. The truck goes zooming off down the road. She looks
up and sees a man looking down on her.
Man
Are you okay?
Kristin
I think so… (A slight pause) You
saved my life. Thank you
Man
It was nothing
Kristin
No, I could have been squashed by
that truck.
Man
Don’t mention it.
He stands up and reaches down to help
us Kristin. She dusts her self off. As she is regaining her composure,
the man picks up her groceries and puts them back into the bag. He
pauses when he picks up the pregnancy checker.
Man
There you go (He hands her the
groceries)
Kristin
Thank you so much
Man
Sure, well, have a good day (He turns
and starts to walk away)
Kristin
Wait a second (She walks over to the
man)
You just saved my life; do you want
to get some coffee or something?
Man
(Hesitating) Sure
Kristin
Great let me put my groceries in my
car
She walks over to her car and puts
the groceries in the trunk. She then turns around and faces the man.
Kristin
I’m Kristin
Man
I’m Dave.
Kristin
Come on, let’s go to the place on the
corner over there.
Man
Okay
The two walk over to the coffee
house. Cut to inside of coffee house
INTERIOR: COFFEE SHOP, DAY
The camera opens up in the restaurant
to see a nice old lady behind the counter. She is getting a cup of
coffee for an elderly man. The camera pans over and sees Kristin and
Dave sitting against the wall quietly talking. The camera moves to the
front of the table where they are sitting at.
Kristin
So where are from originally?
Dave
Chicago
Kristin
Chicago? How did you wind up in the
small town of State College?
Dave
(He sighs) I got tired of the city
life. I wanted to come to a small town. There was a job opening here
so I took it.
Kristin
Got a wife, girlfriend
Dave
(He shakes his head
slowly) Unfortunately, no. But I am always looking for a future
ex-girlfriend. (He laughs)
Kristin
(Laughing) Yea,. What do you do?
Dave
I am a systems analyst for the
University.
Kristin
Oh, so you work with computers
Dave
Yes, I have been there for about 5
years now. So how bout you?
Kristin
(She holds up her hand with the ring
on it) Just had my one year anniversary
Dave
|That’s great
Kristin
Yea, my husband is great. You will
have to meet him, the guy that saved my life.
Dave
Sure, but I do not want to intrude
Kristin
Don’t worry, you won’t. All of our
friends left town so we don’t really meet new people. I guess we met by
fate then
Dave
I guess so (He has a snide smirk on
his face)
They continue drinking their
coffees. The camera cuts to the outside of the restaurant, where we see
the two of them sitting at the table. The scene ends.
EXTERIOR: COFFEE SHOP, DAY
Kristin and Dave are standing at her
car talking. They are seen from a distance but the camera then cuts to
close-ups.
Kristin
So it was really nice meeting you
Dave.
Dave
And you Kristin
The two of them shake hands as they
are smiling
Kristin
Dave, why don’t you give me your
number so we can get together sometime?
Dave
But you are married.
Kristin
(Laughing) It is not like a date. My
husband and I, you, a date maybe?
Dave
Okay, sounds good
Kristin
Alright, Talk to you later. Bye
Dave
Have a good day
Kristin gets in her car and proceeds
to put the seatbelt over her body. She turns on the car and backs up
and as she drives away she turns to Dave, smiles and waves goodbye. He
does the same. The camera cuts to Kristin and John’s home.
INTERIOR: HOUSE, DAY
The camera opens up in the bedroom
and pans around until it stops as it focuses in on the opened pregnancy
test kit on the bed. From there, the camera goes into the bathroom
where Kristin is sitting on the toilet gazing straight forward. She
looks over at the pregnancy test kit on the sink counter. She then gets
up and goes over to it and stands in front of it. She stares at herself
in the mirror and then closes her eyes as if she is wishing. She opens
her eyes back up and looks down and sees two blue lines. She picks up
the kit and a smile comes across her face. She goes over to the bed and
lays down. She closes her eyes and falls asleep.
INTERIOR: HOUSE, NIGHT
The camera comes in on spaghetti
sauce and angel hair pasta cooking on top of the stove. The camera then
pans around and Kristin is tossing some salad. The door to the house
opens and in comes John. He sets his briefcase on the chair and comes
over and gives Kristin a big kiss.
Kristin
What kind of day did you have?
John
Great now that it is over
Kristin
That good huh?
John
(Sighs) Yeah
He goes over to the bathroom as
Kristin comes over to set up the table. After she finishes with the
table she starts to carry over the food. John comes over and sits down
as does Kristin. They say grace and begin their dinner.
John
Oh, this is great honey. Angel Hair
is my favorite.
Kristin
Thanks, I knew you would like it
A slight pause as they continue to
eat their dinner.
Kristin
So I met a nice guy today
John
(Chokes, and then coughs because he
is caught off guard. He takes a sip of his water)
You met a guy?
Kristin
Yea, he saved my life
John
Oh, thank God, I though you were
leaving me. (Laughs) He saved your life?
Kristin
Yes, I almost got hit my car after I
left the grocery story. Some kid on a bike hit my groceries and I
dropped them and in the process, forgot about the road next to me.
John nods in interest
Kristin
A gentleman named Dave came out of
nowhere to get me out of the way of the truck. It was a close one
John
I am glad he did, because I would
miss you too much
Kristin
Oh, you are so sweet.
John
So who is this guy, do I get to meet
him?
Kristin
Sure, we had coffee after the fact
and I learned a lot about him. I have his number so we can get together
with him sometime.
John
Set it up
He gets up and walks over to her and
gives her a kiss and then leaves the room. Kristin looks as he leaves
the room and then looks down at her stomach, knowing that she will have
to tell him later about the news of a new family member on the way. The
scene ends as she clears the table.
INTERIOR: HOUSE, NIGHT
Kristin and John are sitting on the
couch together watching a movie on the Television. All of the lights
are off except for the window lights and the occasional flicker coming
from the TV. Kristin is laying down on her back and leaning on John who
is in an upright position.
Kristin
John.....
John
What (He is fixated on the
television)
Kristin
There is something I need to tell you
John
What is it?
Kristin
Well, I don’t really know how to say
this but (She is flustered)
John
(He mutes the TV) Kristin what?
Kristin
I’m pregnant
John
(Pauses for a minute) That’s
terrific (He turns her around towards him) that’s great news
Kristin
Really? (A sigh of relief comes
across her face) I thought you would be upset
John
No, why would I be upset? I’m happy
(He kisses her on the forehead)
Kristin
I want a boy
John
Me too, but I would be happy with
either.
Kristin
Do you want me to have a gender check
when the time is right?
John
No, it will be a better surprise.
Kristin
(She crawls closer to John) I love
you (She kisses him) The scene fades.
INTERIOR: HOUSE, DAY
Kristin comes down the steps and walks to the kitchen. She walks over
to the counter and picks up the cordless phone. She then turns around
and walks over to the refrigerator and grabs a stick it from the door.
The camera zooms in on the stick it to display John’s phone number. She
dials the phone number and leans back against the counter.
INTERIOR: OFFICE, DAY
The camera moves in a straight line
from the right to the left as it comes in on John sitting at his desk.
He is typing something on his keyboard. He is sitting straight up with
good posture. The camera switches to the right side of him, right
underneath his head. He has a perturbed look on his face. The phone
rings. He stops what he is doing and looks to the right. He stares at
the phone for about three rings, and then he picks it up.
Dave
Hello, this is Dave
Kristin
Hi Dave. Its Kristin, how is it going?
Dave
Oh, hi Kristin (Real Happy to hear her)
Kristin
How is work?
Dave
Man, I have been pulling my hair out all day long. I cannot wait till
this day is over
Kristin
Sounds like someone is having fun. (She laughs)
Dave
Yea right
Kristin
Anyway, the reason I was calling was to see if you wanted to come out
with us on Friday night
Dave
Us?
Kristin
Yes, myself and my husband, John
Dave
(Hesitates) Sure I will go
Kristin
Great, we are going to be at Night Owl at 8:00. Meet us there
Dave
Alright, see-you on Friday
Kristin
See-ya.
Dave
Bye
Dave hangs up the phone and turns
back to his monitor. From around the corner of his cube comes another
person. He walks in and just stands there staring at Dave. Dave
ignores him at first but then turns around real slowly.
Dave
Yes, what can I help you with (Smug)
Steve
Ever since you guys applied that upgrade I haven’t been able to get
email on my computer
Dave
Really? (Perturbed that he said that)
Steve
Yes, it is really important that I get these emails that the vendors are
sending me.
Dave
Show me
He gets up and walks out of his cube
with Steve. The scene cuts to them walking down the hall. Steve walks
hurriedly in the lead as Dave follows. They arrive at the cube and
Steve sits down at the chair and starts working the mouse.
Steve
See what I mean, it worked until this morning
Dave
Let me have seat
Dave sits down in chair as Steve
stands impatiently behind him looking over his shoulder. Dave takes
notice to this and gives an annoyed look. He is there for less than a
minute when he fixes the problem. He stands up and walks away.
Steve
Well? Where are you going?
Dave
It’s fixed
Steve
What was it
Dave
The server setting was wrong
Steve
I will never understand you people
The camera is in front of Dave as he
walks away and he gives a smile as Steve makes the last statement. The
scene ends as Dave walks into the camera.
EXTERIOR: RESTAURANT, NIGHT
It is a brilliant clear night sky
with a full moon off to the right of the frame. The camera pans from
the sky to the front of a restaurant. The restaurant is a typical
college crowd and up style with bright lights and inviting signs. The
Night Owl it is called. The entrance is bustling with patrons as they
continue to go in, with not many coming out. Cut to inside
INTERIOR: RESTAURANT, NIGHT
We get a glimpse of the indoor
environment as the camera does a 360. The patrons that have gathered
are in their mid twenties and up. The décor is new in age probably
because the restaurant opened up a few months ago. There are big screen
TV’s, sports memorabilia, pool tables and much more. Everybody is in
casual dress as well as the employees even though they still are wearing
an official uniform. It is one big open place with a bar in the back
and many tables in the front. There are also couches and stools by the
sides along the walls. It looks like everybody there is having a good
time since the place is filled with conversations. The camera follows a
waitress who has a tray with two drinks on it. She carries it over to a
table where Kristin and John are sitting.
Waitress
Here is your fuzzy naval (she sets it in front of Kristin)
And a lager for the sir
Kristin
Thank you
John
And thank you Mindy, you have outdone yourself
Mindy
Thanks
She walks away and Kristin gives her
the evil look and then turns to John
John
What
Kristin
You know what (Smiling)
John
Oh, that was nothing
Kristin
I saw the way you talked to her
John
Yea, well, I am not having a baby with her (He kisses uncontrollably on
the back of her neck)
Kristin
(Giggling because she is ticklish) Okay, okay
John
(Takes a drink of his beer)
So when is your friend going to get here?
Kristin
(She looks
down at her watch) Dave should be here any minute now.
Cut to outside
EXTERIOR: RESTAURANT, NIGHT
From the street pulls in a dark colored SUV. He drives around the side
of the restaurant and parks vehicle. Camera cuts to the inside of the
vehicle as we get a close up of Dave’s eye looking into the rear-view
mirror. He is checking to make sure if he looks okay, by fixing his
hair. He then opens up the door to the vehicle and proceeds to get
out. He quietly walks over to the front of the restaurant and up the
steps. When he gets to the top, he stops and opens the door for a young
couple, and then proceeds to walk in.
INTERIOR: RESTAURANT, NIGHT
Dave walks to the entrance of the “restaurant” area and stops to look
around. He looks around the whole place but he cannot find anybody. He
starts to walk over to the bar in the corner. There are people
everywhere so he tries to squeeze in between everybody. That coupled
with the fact that there are waitresses everywhere carrying drinks and
food orders hinders his progress. Finally, after what seems like an
eternity, he makes it over to the bar. He waits patiently for the
bartender to serve him.
Bartender
What can I get for you (he points at him)
Dave
Ahh, how about a lager?
The bartender goes over to the tap
and starts to fill up the glass. Dave turns his back to the bar as he
tries to locate Kristin and her husband. He looks down at his watch
which reads 7:58 P.M. He turns back to the bar. The bartender walks
over with the glass of beer and sets it on the bar.
Bartender
Okay buddy that's four bucks
Dave pulls out his wallet and gives
the bartender a five spot.
Dave
Thanks
He turns around and takes a sip of
his beer. He continues to look around but he sees nothing. Cut to John
and Kristin’s table.
John
So when do you want to tell your parents about the baby?
Kristin
The next time we see them I guess
John
Sounds good to me honey
Kristin holds up her drink and John
does the same. They perform the "cheers" ritual and take a sip.
As Kristin takes the glass away from her mouth she jumps with a surprise
look.
Kristin
Oh, there’s Dave.
John
Where?
Kristin
Over there by the bar
The camera looks over at the bar at
John turning towards the bar.
Kristin
I am going to go get him
John
Alright
Kristin puts her glass down and gets
up from the table. She walks hurriedly over the bar as she dodges the
people and the staff. When she gets to the bar she sees that Dave has
his back to her. She walks over and softly taps him on his shoulder.
Dave jumps but then proceeds to turn around.
Dave
Oh, Hi Kristin (a smile comes across her face)
Kristin
Hey Dave. How are you?
Dave
Not bad, how bout yourself?
Kristin
Good. Have you been here long?
Dave
No, about five minutes. I walked around the place but I did not see you
Kristin
Were nestled in at the table over there (She points back to her table)
Come on, I will show you the way to our table.
Kristin leads the way as they walk
over to the table. When they get there Kristin proceeds with the
introduction.
Kristin
John this is Dave
Dave
This is my husband John
John stands up and shakes the hand of
Dave. Dave has a happy yet troubled look on his face as he shakes the
hand of John. It’s as if he resents the fact that John is married to a
beautiful woman such as Kristin.
John
Have a seat Dave
Dave
Thanks
Dave waits until Kristin sits down
and then he proceeds to take his seat.
John
So Dave, Kristin tells me that you pulled her out of the way of a
speeding truck. I thank you greatly for that. (He leans over and kisses
Kristin)
Dave
(He sees them kissing and hesitates) It was nothing, really
John
Nah, she might not be here right now if it wasn’t for you
There is a long pause
Kristin
Dave works up at the University
Dave
Is that right?
Dave
Yes, I am a systems analyst in the Business College. What about you?
John
I am a lawyer at Winters and Smith Associates.
Kristin
He is the best lawyer that they have, isn’t that right dear?
John
Oh stop it, everybody is good.
She looks at him as if he is wrong
John
Okay, well I guess I am good, let’s leave it at that.
Dave
So tell me, how did you guys meet?
John
Well, actually (He is interrupted by Kristin)
Kristin
(Happily tells the story) It was freshmen year in College during our
Art class. I noticed John sitting by himself in the back of the
classroom. Every once in while we would make eye contact but he would
always look away because he was embarrassed.
John
I was not embarrassed
Kristin
Oh, you so were
John
But...
Kristin
Anyway, I saw him at a Frat party one night while I was there with my
friends. He was having a drink with one of his friends in the corner.
His friend came over and starting talking to my friend but he still
stayed over there by himself. So, I decided to take matters into my own
hands.
John
I’m glad you did
Kristin
(Laughing) Yes I did. I started talking to him. He was so nervous that
he dropped his bottle of beer. Long story short, we started dating and
we have been together ever since.
Dave
Wow, touching
Kristin
(Laughing) He’s my cutie (She leans over and gives John a hug)
John
So Dave, what about you? Any special somebody?
Dave
Not really. I dated a girl for a couple years about five years ago.
Didn’t work out
John
Not even a date?
Dave
Nope. I had one a while ago but nothing developed.
John
Kristin, don’t you know some single women?
Kristin
Yes I do, I would love to set you up Dave
Dave
That is not necessary
John
It’s the least we can do.
Kristin
Yes, there is a girl I work with. Her name is Amanda. She is very cute
and very funny. You would like her
Dave
Okay
The waitress comes over to the
table.
Mandy
I see the third member of your party is here. Do you need another
minute or are you ready to order?
John
You ready honey
Kristin
Yes
John
Dave?
Dave
You guys go ahead while I look at the menu
The scene ends as they are ordering
their dinner.
EXTERIOR: RESTAURANT, NIGHT
There is a close-up of the door to
the restaurant. The door swings open and Dave is there holding the door
as Kristin and John walk through the exit.
Kristin
Thank you
Dave
(He lets go of the door) Sure
He continues to walk behind the two
of them and over to their cars. When they get over to their car, the
three of them stop.
Dave
Thanks for inviting me out tonight. I had a good time.
Kristin
It was our pleasure
John
Yes we will have to do it again
Dave
I would like that
John
Hey, do you have plans tomorrow?
Dave
Nothing that I can remember
John
Do you play golf?
Kristin
Oh here we go (She gives a tired sigh)
John
What?
Dave
Actually I do
John
I have a tee time at 8:15 for a foursome but one cannot make it. Were
looking for a fourth. You interested?
Dave
Yeah, that would be great
John
Good, I will see you at Free Stone. Do you know where it is?
Dave
That is the new course off of the mountain right?
John
Yep. I will be there at 7:45
Dave
Great. Thanks
Kristin
O golly, the testosterone will be flying high tomorrow. (She turns to
Dave) Don’t let them get to you. (Jokingly)
Dave
(Laughing) Thanks, I will be fine. I’ll see you guys later. Thanks
again for inviting me out
Dave leaves the two and walks over to
his car. Cut back to Kristin and John who are getting in their black
Lexus SUV. The vehicle starts and the lights come on. They back up and
then pull out of the parking lot and turn right on to the main road. Cut
to inside of Lexus.
INTERIOR: LEXUS, NIGHT
John and Kristin are in the car
driving down the road. The radio is playing some soft rock like Creed
or Nickelback. There are a lot of cars on the road as we can see as the
camera looks straight forward. The camera then moves to John’s angle
from the dashboard.
John
He seems like a nice guy
Kristin
Yea he is.
John
I wonder how good of a golfer he is
Kristin
You’ll find that out tomorrow dear.
John
He will get to see the master of golf
Kristin
Sure dear
John
I am serious. I take after Tiger Woods
Kristin
Maybe on the computer, but even there I beat you (Laughs)
John
I let you win
Kristin
Rematch when we get home.
John
You’re on. Ha ha you are so going down
Kristin
We’ll see
The music comes up louder now as they
continue to drive down the road. The camera goes black
EXTERIOR: GOLF COURSE, DAY
It is a beautiful day outside as
there is but one cloud in the sky. People are practicing on the putting
and chipping green. In the distance, you can see people driving balls
from the driving range stall. John’s black Lexus pulls into a spot
underneath a tree, away from the other cars. He gets out of the car and
proceeds to stretch. He then walks behind the vehicle and pops the
hatch to the trunk. Out comes a blue golf back that John sets on the
ground. The legs automatically open up as he sets it down. John grabs
for his golf shoes and sits down in the trunk and puts them on. This
must be the busy time because cars are pulling in all around him.
Chatter is heard coming from the cars in front of him as well as the
people that are hauling their clubs to the clubhouse. An occasional
golfer will greet John as he does in return. He closes the trunk and
puts the clubs on his back. He follows everybody else up to the green.
As he is walking the camera switches to his point of view and we see
Dave on the practice green.
John
Hey Dave (He yells for him)
Dave looks up from his put and waves
to him. We watch John walk up to Dave from a lowered position as Dave
putts and drains the cup from 20 feet.
John
Nice shot!
Dave
Thanks
John
What’s up?
Dave
Just a little practice, I haven’t played in a while
John
Your rust doesn’t show
Dave
Where are the other guys?
John
(He looks down at his watch) Any minute now
John gets some balls out and starts
to practice.
EXTERIOR: DAY, FIRST TEE
There is a close up of John and his
two friends as they sit in the golf carts. They are quietly talking
amongst themselves. They are not really paying that much attention to
Dave who is getting ready to tee off. Dave is taking his time on the
tee as he surveys the shot. He then takes his stance and crushes a huge
drive. He looks back at the guys on the carts with a smile on his face,
but they are not looking at him. He walks back to where the other guys
are, puts his driver in the bag and takes his seat.
Dave
You’re up John
John
(Turns away from the other two guys) Alright
As he walking up to the green he
makes a smart comment
John
Let me show you fellas how it is done
He takes a big swing and hits the
ball about 1 yards shorter of Dave’s ball
John
(Disappointed) Huh, someone out drove me
He gets back in the cart and they all
drive off in their carts to find their golf balls. Cut to shot of two
golf balls. One is Johns and the other’s is Dave’s, which is about 2
two yards in front of John’s. John and Dave, who are riding together,
come up the fairway in their cart. They pull up the balls and get out
of the cart. After the two pull respective club from the bags, they
walk up to the two balls. John is more concerned for the ball in front
of his. Dave slowly and confidently walks up to the ball and checks out
the shot he has left to hit the green.
John
That is a hell of a shot Dave
Dave
Thanks
John
You must have been playing for a while because I usually do not get out
driven.
Dave
Well, I used to be in a league.
John
It shows
John walks around his ball as he his
looking up at the green. He takes a step back and then addresses a
ball. He takes a swing and sends the ball flying into the air. We see
the ball as it continues its arc to the green. Cut to the green where
we see Dave and John in the background. The ball drops and rolls to
about 8 feet from the whole.
Dave
Nice Shot
John
Thanks, all in a days work
Dave
I guess it’s my turn
Dave surveys his shot and then
addresses the ball. He takes a nice, slow swing. A huge divot comes
out of the grass as he follows through. The ball soars into the air as
he watches it while holding his club in the post swing. Cut to green.
The ball hits where Dave’s ball is and rolls about four feet closer to
the hole. John’s jaw drops as he cannot believe what just happened.
Dave lets the club slide down his hands as he admires the shot he just
made.
John
Looks like someone has an easy putt for birdie
Dave
You as well
John
But mine isn’t putter length.
Dave
Well, what can I say?
John
It’s going to be a long day
This is the start of a montage of
golf shots. The shots consist of John and Dave trying to up the other.
Shots of putting, chipping, driving, and some other shots fill the
scenes. We really can’t too who is winning because even though they are
having great shots, they still have bad shots as well. This goes on for
about 30-40 seconds until it cuts to the 18th green. A ball
has just rolled into the cup.
John
Nice shot, looks like I need this for the win
Dave
Yes, but its all for fun
John
Right
John takes his time with the shot as
he is under a considerable amount of pressure. He checks the shot from
every angle making sure that he has the break and the speed perfect.
Other guys
Come on John, just miss it and tie so we can go
John
Just hold on
He stands over the ball as he
prepares to take the shot. He takes a deep breath as he looks at the
hole for the last time. He swings the putter at the ball in a pendulum
motion. The ball goes towards the hole as it slopes from left to
right. Cut back to the expression on John’s face and then to Dave. The
ball starts to slow as it gets ever so close to the hole. The ball
comes to a slow roll right at the lip of the cup and just as you think
it is going to stop, it falls in. John is flabergastic as he drops to
his knees. Dave puts his head down and walks over to the cart.
Other guys
Great shot John. Now can we go?
John
You betcha.
John walks over to the cart and puts
his putter in the bag. Dave is sitting in the cart waiting for John
John
Looks like I won by a stroke
Dave
Looks that way
John
Hey, no hurt feelings alright. (He extends his hand)
Dave
No hurt feelings (He shakes John’s hand)
They drive off and the scene ends.
INTERIOR: OFFICE, DAY
There are five people sitting around
a conference room discussing the latest case. John and two of the other
men in the room were with him and Dave when they were golfing a few days
ago. There is also one lady sitting at the head of the table between
John and Tim. The other guy, Kyle, is sitting across the table next to
John. There are a bunch of papers and manila folders thrown about on
the table. An old white-haired man is barking orders at the four of
them as he paces back and forth in front of them.
Jack Winters
Come on now, people. What the hell have you been doing lately?
A blank stare comes across the four
of his employees at the other end of the table.
Jack Winters
(Picks up a folder and looks it over for a second and throws it on the
table)
You people are a disgrace. What the
hell do I pay you for? You’re losing cases that some bum on the street
could win. Well guess what? If we don’t win cases, we don’t get any
money now do we? And if we don’t get any money, then I can’t pay your
sorry asses.
John
Listen, Jack
Jack Winters
No, you listen John, you are not as good as you think you are. You need
to be doing it better and smarter than the next guy, so get on it.
John
Yes sir
The door opens and in comes a
secretary for Winters.
Teresa
Excuse me, Mr. Winters
Winters
What is it Teresa? (A real angry tone in his voice)
A Mr. Robinson, He says he is your
friend
Winters
Oh yes, thank you Teresa, I will be right there.
She turns and leaves the conference
room
Winters
Come on John, I need you for this case. I wouldn’t trust these
imbeciles with a petty theft case
The other three display a sad look on
their faces. John gets up and walks out of the room with Jack. The
door closes to the office but then Jack opens the door and sticks his
head in.
Winters
Well, let’s go ladies; there is work to be done. (He closes the door)
Kyle
Man, does someone have a bug up there ass today
Winters-from the other room
I heard that
Lady
(Sighs) We can’t win.
The three of them get up and leave
the conference room.
INTERIOR: WINTER’S OFFICE, DAY
Jack Winters and John are sitting at
opposite sides of the desk. A voice is heard coming from the speaker
phone. It is coming from Mr. Robinson who is explaining some things to
John and Jack.
Mr. Robinson
So like I was saying, my wife has had serious problems with her knees
since she had knee surgery.
John
Well did the doctor say she would experience any side effects after the
surgery?
Jack looks on curiously as if John is
being a smart ass.
Mr. Robinson
No, Dr. Welsh said she would be back to normal within a month. It has
been over two months. She has such excruciating pain all day long.
I’ve had to get her pain medication just so she can get by.
John
Malpractice cases are very tough in court. The hospital has great
lawyers.
Jack
Nonsense. You are better than any of them. Look at this way, win or
find another job. (He starts laughing followed by the other three)
Jack
We will look into it, buddy. Drop by today with all of the information
and give it to John
Mr. Robinson
You got it Jack. I will talk to you later.
A click is heard from the speaker
phone. Jack reaches up and hangs up his end
Jack
So what do you think?
John
Hmmmm… Well it is going to be a tough case like I said
Jack
Come on John, you’ve done ones like this before
John
True, but malpractice cases are unpredictable.
Jack
Well, don’t worry. Robinson will stop by later with some more info. I
want you to get into this tonight.
John
But
Jack
No buts John, we need to get rolling on this. He is my friend from the
army and I want him to have your full and undivided attention.
John
Okay sir
Jack
Great
They both sit there but Jack turns to
his computer. He then turns back to John who is still sitting there.
Jack
That is all John
John gets up and leaves the room.
Walks out of Jack’s office and close the door as Jack sits quietly at
his desk working on some paperwork. When the door closes, John lets out
a sigh of relief and then walks over to his desk. He sits down at his
desk and leans back into his chair. After a couple seconds he leans
forward and starts typing into his laptop.
INTERIOR: HOUSE, DAY
Kristin is walking around the house
talking to her friend Sarah on the phone. She is wearing a pair of
jogging pants and a white tank top, which shows off her beautiful body.
She walks over to the TV room and lays down on the couch and puts her
legs over the top of the couch.
Kristin
I think you will really like Dave, he is such a nice guy. Did I tell you
that he saved my life?
Kristin
Oh, three times already
Kristin
Oh hold on, I have another call. (She pushes a button on the phone)
Hello
John
Hey Honey
Kristin
Oh, hey, hold on, I have Sarah on the other line. (She pushes the flash
button) Sarah, its John, we will be by to pick you up around 6:30, Bye
bye. (She starts talking to John)
What’s up?
John
Well, I got some bad news
Kristin
What is it?
John
It looks like I will not be able to make it tonight
Kristin
Why not (angry tone in her voice)
John
Winter’s has me here all night working on this case for his buddy
Kristin
John, we’re going out with Dave and Sarah tonight, remember, I set up
Sarah and Dave?
John
I remember, honey I am sorry, there is nothing I can do
Kristin
Why does your work always come ahead of me
John
You know that is not true
Kristin
Whatever
John
Kristin, (click)
She hands up the phone in disgust and
walks into the kitchen. Cut back to John who slowly puts the phone down
and leans back in his chair. As he breaths a heavy sigh he looks over
to Jack’s office where he is standing looking at him through the
window. John leans forward and continues his work on the laptop.
EXTERIOR MOVIE THEATER: NIGHT
Kristin and Sarah are walking towards
the theater as they chat along the way.
Sarah
I am so nervous
Kristin
Oh, don’t be.
Sarah
I have never been out on a blind date before, do you think it’s too late
to bail?
Kristin
What? Oh no
Sarah
What’s with you?
Kristin
I’m thinking about John. I was a real bitch on the phone earlier because
of work and all.
Sarah
He’s a big boy, he will get over it.
They stop walking and wait outside of
the theater for Dave
Sarah
You gave him for not coming out. I would have too. It is important
that they fear you. (She laughs)
Kristin
I will have to remember that
Sarah
So where is this loser?
Kristin
Sarah! He is a nice guy
Sarah
Okay, okay
Kristin
You will love him, I know you will
The camera pans as the door to the
movie theater opens and Dave walks out with a soda and a huge container
of popcorn. He has a big smile on his face
Dave
Hello ladies
Kristin and Sarah turn around
Kristin and Sarah
Hi
Kristin
Dave, this is my best friend Sarah. Sarah this is Dave
Kristin introduces the two. Sarah
and Dave shake hands.
Dave
It’s nice to meet you
Sarah
You too
Kristin
Come on we better get inside before it gets sold out
Dave
Oh don’t worry about that. I got the tickets already.
He gets out three tickets and gives
one to Sarah and one to Kristin
Kristin
You didn’t have to do that
Dave
Ahh, forget about it
Sarah
That is so sweet
Dave opens the door and looks back to
the girls
Dave
Shall we?
Kristin and Sarah walk into the
theater as Dave holds the door. Sarah thanks Dave as she passes by
him. When they get inside the two girls look at each other. Sarah
turns to Kristin and they both smile.
Dave
Does anyone want something to eat?
Kristin
No thanks
Sarah
Can I have some of your’s
Dave
Sure
The three of them walk over to the
ticket taker and gives him their ticket. They walk down to theater on
the left and in the door. As most people that go to the movies, the
three stand around looking for a good spot.
Sarah
Where should we sit?
Kristin
How about in the back?
Sarah
Sounds good, what do you think Dave
Dave
Whatever you guys want
Sarah
He is very easy to get along with
Kristin
I told you
The three slide in the back row of
the theater. Kristin, followed by Dave and Sarah sit down in the middle
of the back row. Dave and Sarah continue to talk to each other, but
every so often Dave will look over at Kristin. The lights dim and the
screen lights up as the movie starts.
INTERIOR: OFFICE, NIGHT
John is sitting quietly at his desk
working on the case for Mr. Robinson. As he is working on his laptop,
he occasionally turns to the folders of papers on his desk. The sound
of a door shutting is heard off of the screen. John looks up as Winters
leaves his office for the day.
Winters
Keep up the good work John.
John
Yes,...
By the time he says that Winters is
already out of the office. John sighs and gets back to work.
EXTERIOR: MOVIE THEATER, NIGHT
Sarah, Dave, and Kristin walk out of
the theater in a deep discussion of the movie. They are all laughing.
Sarah
No way was that possible
Kristin
What the getaway at the end?
Sarah
Yes. They couldn’t get through all those people
Dave
Not true, always believe there is a way in the Cinema
Sarah
(Laughing) I’ll remember that. So you guys want to get something to
eat?
Dave
Sure, I am starving
Kristin
I think I am going to go see John at the office. We had a fight on the
phone and I want to go fix things
Sarah
Okay. Dave, you still want to get something to eat?
Dave
Yeah okay
Kristin
I’ll talk to you tomorrow Sarah. Call me. See-you Dave
Kristin gets into her car and drives
off
EXTERIOR: WINTERS AND ASSOCIATES
OFFICE BUILDING, NIGHT
The camera pulls away from a shot of
the sign on the building to the car coming into the parking lot.
Kristin pulls up in front of the building right next to John’s sports
car. She gets out of her vehicle and walks up to the front door and
into the building.
Cut to office interior
John is in the kitchen getting a soda
out of the fridge and a bag of chips from the cupboard. He walks out of
the kitchen and back to his desk. The office is completely empty as it
should be at 10:30 at night. He sits down and takes a drink of his soda
and lets out a big enjoying sigh. He grabs some chips out of the bag
and turns to his computer. A noise of a door shutting is heard behind
him.
John turns around and looks at the
conference room.
John
Is there someone here?
He gets up and walks over to the
conference room. He slowly opens the door and turns on the light. He
looks around the room and sees nothing. He then turns back to the door
where he sees Kristin waiting in the corner. She jumps up on him and
gives him a big hug. The momentum of the jump causes John to fall back
onto the conference room table. He softly lays across the table as
Kristin is on top of him.
Kristin
Hey baby
John
Hey Kristin, what are you doing here?
Kristin
I came to see you. I felt bad about the fight we had on the phone
earlier.
John
Oh, don’t worry about it, it was my fault anyway (He kisses her on her
forehead)
Kristin
But, I still wanted to make it up to you (A small grin comes across her
face)
John
(Pauses for a moment) Here?
Kristin
Why not? Everybody left right?
John
Well, yes, but...
Kristin takes off her shirt and then
proceeds to take off Johns. She pushes John back onto the table. She
slides down his body and pulls off his pants and then climbs back up on
top of him. The scene fades as she kisses him romantically on the
lips.
EXTERIOR: SARAH’S APARTMENT, NIGHT
Dave and Sarah are walking up the
street to her apartment holding hands. When they get to the door to the
apartment of the apartment complex they stop and turn toward each
other.
Sarah
I had a great time tonight Dave, thanks again for the movie and for
dinner
Dave
No problem
Sarah
We’ll have to do it again.
Dave
Yea, okay
Sarah leans over and kisses Dave
Sarah
Bye
Dave
Bye
Dave turns away and walks back to his
car.
INTERIOR: WINTER’S OFFICE, NIGHT
John and Kristin’s clothes are
scattered on the floor under the desk. The two are lying on the table
naked still as they are talking.
John
So how was the movie?
Kristin
Good, but I am more excited about Sarah and Dave
John
Oh, really?
Kristin
Yes, I think they will be make a great couple
John
Good
Kristin
(Sighs) So you think Winter’s will let you go home now?
John
No, but we’re going anyway (He turns over and kisses her)
John gets off the table and picks up
his clothes. He tosses Kristin’s clothes at her face in a joking way
Kristin
Jerk
John
(Laughs) Like old times huh?
Kristin
Yep
The two leave the room and shut off
the lights as the camera zooms in on the black panties of Kristin’s.
The scene goes dark.
EXTERIOR: HOUSE, NIGHT
John and
Kristin pull up to their house. John gets out of his car and walks back
to Kristin’s car where he picks her up and closes the door with his
foot. He carries her into the house as they are both laughing. The
camera turns 180 degrees where we see Dave staring at the two from the
front seat of his truck. He gets a jealous look on his face. The scene
fades as he continues to look on.
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